Curse

tommarrow · May 03, 2006, 06:40 PM // 18:40

I think a ferret just got a tumor.

~ Star Maiden ~ · May 03, 2006, 06:42 PM // 18:42

Jiao, I read what you wrote

It's nice but if you wouldn't mind I could help you with some grammatical and sentence structure issues. I'm a writer myself (English lit major here), mostly poetry and short stories, and I'd be happy to lend some advice and feedback.

Jiao Yang · May 03, 2006, 06:44 PM // 18:44

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unlucky Slayer

Still too much to read...

Curse you! Now a ferret has a tumor..

tommarrow · May 03, 2006, 06:44 PM // 18:44

I would love to go to E3, that would be so cool. I could take my Suri and we would have lots of fun.

hehe
I meant at the E3, perverts.

Jiao Yang · May 03, 2006, 06:50 PM // 18:50

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~ Star Maiden ~

Jiao, I read what you wrote

It's nice but if you wouldn't mind I could help you with some grammatical and sentence structure issues. I'm a writer myself (English lit major here), mostly poetry and short stories, and I'd be happy to lend some advice and feedback.

Well, that was really just meant to be a joke. I wrote it on that 'the resistance is here' thread because everyone else was writing really strange stuff. So I decided to show off my super fast rabbity typing skills and write that.. my friend already pointed out loads of typos

But thanks for the offer, I do have some real pieces that you could look over, I would much appreciate it.. (if I can be bothered to type it all up

)

~ Star Maiden ~ · May 03, 2006, 06:56 PM // 18:56

Quote:

Originally Posted by tommarrow

I would love to go to E3, that would be so cool. I could take my Suri and we would have lots of fun.

hehe
I meant at the E3, perverts.

I would looooove to be taken to E3! Can we go can we go can we go, please oh please oh please, Tommy Tom? *bounces on my tiptoes excitedly*

Oh sure, like you weren't planning on getting just one hotel room with that one double bed.

And Jiao, I got'cha. I'd be glad to help however you'd like, either by just reading your stuff and telling you my impressions or critically reviewing it.

Witchblade · May 03, 2006, 07:01 PM // 19:01

i d like to go once, with Suri, i'd LOVE to

Jiao Yang · May 03, 2006, 07:04 PM // 19:04

Bye everyone! Time to learn some french

I dont want to be a french rabbit, its not fair!

Witchblade · May 03, 2006, 07:07 PM // 19:07

need a hand?

Kailynn Ember · May 03, 2006, 07:14 PM // 19:14

Getting ready for work.

yucky! I doesn't wants to go precious.... they will hurts us and be tricksy with their monies.

Sir Skullcrasher · May 03, 2006, 07:16 PM // 19:16

whats everyone up to today??

tommarrow · May 03, 2006, 07:17 PM // 19:17

Stop crying Kailynn, your makeup is running.

Unlucky Slayer · May 03, 2006, 07:19 PM // 19:19

TV. Not wanting to re arrange my room.

Sir Skullcrasher · May 03, 2006, 07:32 PM // 19:32

*hug witchblade and star*

~ Star Maiden ~ · May 03, 2006, 07:41 PM // 19:41

Heya skulk!

Yeah, let's all go! TTTT and Sil and Witchy, and the whole OT gang

ROAD TRIP!

I'm teeny... they wouldn't notice if I snuck past security without a press pass, right?

Witchblade · May 03, 2006, 07:55 PM // 19:55

believe me.. u d be noticed

~ Star Maiden ~ · May 03, 2006, 08:03 PM // 20:03

Quote:

Originally Posted by Witchblade

believe me.. u d be noticed

Hehe

Unlucky Slayer · May 03, 2006, 08:10 PM // 20:10

They'd prolly put you on stage to present something.

Witchblade · May 03, 2006, 08:11 PM // 20:11

..or being presented

~ Star Maiden ~ · May 03, 2006, 08:13 PM // 20:13

Are you saying they'd make me a Booth Babe?

Hmm. Wonder how much that pays?